FEEDBACK ON MY VIDEO

After almost completing my video, I decided to ask my fellow colleagues and family to write down anything they like about my video and if I should change anything and what this shall be.
This is some of the feedback I received:

I also recieved feedback from my media teacher, both positive and negative.
Overall,the positive feedback included a good use of mise en scene, clear contrasts between the past and the present and a clear sense of personna for the artist.

Though these were all positive, I was also given ideas for improvements. These included the stillness of the camera work, the variety of shots and the length of time each shot is held.
With these in mind, I decided that it wouldbe useful to overlook for my video again to pin point areas in need of improving.
Though out of this, I decided that it might be a good idea to refilm and film more shots for my video, the main actress in my video has recently dyed her hair a darker colour. This is a problem that I will need to overcome when thinking about how to improve my video.